## Before vs. after

Before · parent artifact v1
Welcome

### A platform that does it all

Lamina is the all-in-one place for your team to do all of the things they need to do.

Get started
After · tuned v2
For product teams

### Ship the thing customers actually asked for.

Lamina turns your scattered tooling into one coherent surface — so the next thing your team ships is the thing your customers wanted.

Start free

## Critique

4.6

- Specific audience (“product teams”) replaces vague “your team”.
- Headline names a real outcome instead of restating the category.
- CTA verb sharpened from “Get started” to “Start free”.
- Lede is still slightly long — consider trimming to one clause for mobile.

## Pipeline trace

1 direction — picked “sharper, audience-named hero”.
2 patch — rewrote eyebrow, title, lede, CTA inline.
3 critique — score 4.1 → 4.6 across 2 iterations.
4 handoff — recorded as `handoffKind: 'patch'`; lineage chain intact.